9 May
2020
9 May
'20
8:56 a.m.
On 08/05/2020 18:23, Brad Klee wrote:
The poem is a good start but not that easy to read. IMO, too much like prose. Here is an alternative version, roughly equivalent:
These COVID, the cancelling germs, Sickened spring and summer terms. Should they plan to attend next fall, we mightn’t commence any at all.
Allan's version is much better, sorry. -- g