Hi, I started writing a new draft titled "The Man Who Knew Infinity: what the film will teach you (and what it won't)" and would love to get your feedback. I plan on publishing it on July 17. <x-apple-data-detectors://0> Please leave your feedback at https://mathenchant.wordpress.com?p=845&shareadraft=57855ac7ad9fa <https://mathenchant.wordpress.com/?p=845&shareadraft=57855ac7ad9fa> keeping in mind that the comments of EVERYONE on math-fun will get funneled through the same email conduit; if you want me to know who you are, please sign your comments! If you sign your comments I'll assume (unless you indicate otherwise) that you don't mind my acknowledging your contribution. Title: "The Man Who Knew Infinity": what the film will teach you (and what it won't) Beginning: During my years as a mathematician, not one film-maker has tried to teach me how to write better articles. So I'm not going to tell Matt Brown, the writer/director of “The Man Who Knew Infinity”, what he should or shouldn't have done in a movie that, as the fine print on the poster reminds us, is ba... Read more: https://mathenchant.wordpress.com?p=845&shareadraft=57855ac7ad9fa <https://mathenchant.wordpress.com/?p=845&shareadraft=57855ac7ad9fa> I appreciate candid criticism from people who share my aims but think I've fallen short of them. Thanks, Jim Propp